nobody told me

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this is my effort at Vintage Troubles Nobody told me
heres the original

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pDr7cQgTHk

comment welcome

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just finished the vocal version if anyone wants to listen

[stainless]

I'd like to hear it with words-

with the instrumental version the deep reverb (and maybe a bit too much distortion) on the guitar riffs the two guitars panned far L/R makes it sound 'too separated"... but vocals might pull it together but I suspect it could be brought a bit closer

unless you're going for a very retro sound, in which case the distortion on the lead guitar is a really a bit too much

\but that's just my opinion

and the bass could be a bit phatter and a tad more volume

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fair comment how does this sound any better?

[stainless]

I like the tone much better!    (I think you could bring it up a bit and or pull the rhythm back a bit.

bass is good

after the first few measures you could pull the kick back a slight bit as the beats established and a trace is all that's required... but that's just me

still want to hear words!!!

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here goes then stainless i did a scratch vocal,you asked for it sorry the vocals so bad i need to redo it thanks for all the help so far. I see what you mean if i cut back the kick in the verses maybe that will help, i'll revisit my midi drum track and sort it out tommorow if i get chance

[stainless]

now i know what song it is!  I was trying figure out how this sounded line John Lennon   

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were a little late back here in England i've only just found this band and i cant wait to get the cd
hope it sounded more grounded with the vocal

[stainless]

yes, the instrumentation is a nice solid bed

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thanks mate
bass and guitar are done through guitar rig 3
drums are midi
vocal needs some work